Story 2 - Southern Heritage Style - Voice - Consistency - 4 -Voice was clear and consistent through whole movie Content - General - 4 Movie had over 10 pictures that stayed on topic.
I feel the Martin Luther King Video stood out to me most. I gave the presentation a three fr organization because it wasnt that consistent.I felt like his death should be at the end not the middle of the presentation. I gave the focus a 4 because different people talk and share information about Martin Luther King. I also gave a 4 for general because they show pictures that are appropriate to the topic.
The video that I'm highlighting is Energy & Force. One rubric point was the stories Style Layout it was creative and was visually appealing. The second rubric point is organization the story and voice were timed right and was well organized. Also the story was a little unclear other then that it was good.
The video for MLK was very educational and interesting. I graded the video based on the rubric and I decided to give the Content a 4 because the images fit and targeted the audience very well. Something that stood out to me was the Point of View. I gave that part a 4 because the story contains detailed personal information that reveals how MLK changed the world. Additionally, how he was inspired by other activists such as Ghandi.
The story I am highlighting is story #1 about MLK. The first rubric point that stood out was Voice Pacing and I gave a 2 because some parts of the story the voices seemed either too fast or too slow for the slideshow. The second rubric point that stood out to me was Organization because some pictures and parts seemed out of place such as talking about his death in the middle of the story and then immediately going back to talking about his life.
energy and force content :4 it was funny and informational style voice : 4 it was good and at was a good accent style imagery :4 it was almost like a video
i am commenting on the video and force i am putting down a grade for point of view- 4 audience- 4 organization-4 layout-4 i think this video was very good it was well introduced this person stayed on topic grabs audience's attention by humor
story #3- energy and force rubric conventions(pics and graphics)- i like the way he mad his own cartoon sort of thing.4 style(voice)- you couldnt realy understand what the person was saying.1
Focus - 4 The point of the slideshow was very clear,but made interesting at the same time. The video was enjoyable,funny and educational. The whole lesson in the video was understood very easily.
Style - Voice pacing - 4 The rythm of the voice makes the video funny. the voice and rythm made me want to pay attention to video and lesson more.
For the story I choose, I choose the story "Energy and Force". For the catogeory of : Style-Layout I gave it a 3 because the layout had a very good and creative layout and as well as appealing. It all went very well together.
Another catogeory I choose was "Style: Voice Consistency": I gave the author of this story a 4 because the narration was very funny and it helped me to get more involed in the story. Plus it went well with the story
The video that I am highlighting is the the Marther Luther King video. I give it a 4 on pictures because it had several photos that went with the story. I also give them a 4 on focus point of you they made it very clear and for elementary school students they did very well.
M.L.K. Style (voice) -1- some words would get cut off, and was unclear Content-4- many images Organization -2- skipped around a lot, story line didn't make sense half of the time
Magnetic Attraction Content-4- many pictures/ilustrations/sounds Organization-4- everything made sense and was easy to follow Style (voice) -4- voice is clear and understandable
Energy and Force Style (voice)-2- voice was clear some of the time Organization-4- everything was clear, visual and easy to follow Content-3- images were okay
Story #1- Martin Luther King Jr. Voice- stayed on topic with story but sometimes cut off and blurry- 2 Convention- Good graphics and pictures to the story- 3 Focus- Stayed on point and on the topic of M.L.K
Story #2- Megnetic Attraction Voice- Understandable and matches the pictures- 4 Focus- Unclear at most parts of the story- 2 Convention- good pictures and correct grammer- 3
Story #3- Force and Energy Voice- unclear and some parts I couldnt understand. Point of View- Very Clear and stayed on 1 topic throughout- 4
Story #1- M.L.K Voicing: Sometimes it was a bit unclear, and the speakers either went too fast or too slow. At the end the voices would fade out before they were done speaking and you couldn't hear what they had to say.- 2 Focus: The focus of this presentation was very clear from the beginning You could tell it was going to be about MLK. -4 Point of View: It was clear and stayed on topic.- 4
Story #2: Magnetic Attraction Voicing: She was very clear and went at the right pace that fit the story.-4 Focus: You could understand the story line, but she left out a couple of details, like mentioning she was divorced, so when she got married I was a bit baffled. -3 Convention: Cute Pictures to match the story, some of them were blurry thought. - 3
Story#3- Force and Energy Voice: Horrible. Just Horrible. I could not understand anything this boy was saying. -1 Point of View: From the beginning of this video I was confused. The next thing I see is some character lady with a gun and the guy shooting her and then I knew I was completely lost. Did not understand at any point. - 1 ( or a 0 if that's an option)
The video that stood out to me was the M.L.K Video. I think it was very impressive how the 5th graders made such a detailed video about Marthin Luther King's fight for civil rights. It was most impressive that they obtained historic Audio footage and pictures. The voice howevercould have been done a little better. Either way, it was a great video.
Pictures (4): Historic photoes were very impressive, and gave me a better idea of what the movie was about.
Audio (4): The audio was historic and actuall footage of M.L.K's "I have a dream" speech.
Voice: (2) From time to time the voice was difficult to understand, and were delayed during the opening of a new picture.
some of them were good but were really boring. i graded most of them a high grade becas they did much better then i would. Overall they were very good.
story 1: M.L.K general-3-good choice of pics voice pacing-3-faded at surtain points images-4-pictures matched the point of the story
story 2:Magnetic Attraction general-4-pictures matched the narration sequence of info.-4-narration met focus of pictures voice pacing-4-good voice narration
story 3:Energy & Force voice-1-Not clear point of view-2- knows what the focus of the topic is images-2-pictures didnt catch my attention
M.L.K I gave this video a three. The reason that I gave it a three was because the images had doubles. I also gave it a three because the voice part of the video was sometimes unclear. for the grade that did it, it was a good and educational video.
The Martin Luther King video I graded on Orginization ( sequence of information ), Content and voice consistency. The speakers paused a lot, but added a lot of pictures, and sound effects, so I graded everything with a 3.
all the movies were very good in detail. as they went on i realized that the information was starting to be put in a better way and the person was getting more familiar with the things they were using.
the martin luther king video not only had great pictures but it had voice over and lots of great effects. i would give it a 4
In the martin luther king video i found that the only real problem with it was the voices. I scored this video on the :voice, croping, and leangth. Scoring each catagory from one to four I found only the voice recived a three, besides that the two other catagories get fours. I found this video to be both informitive and entertaining.
All three of the videos had good points, and bad points. Overall, they were all very well done. The one that I enjoyed the most was the Martin Luther King video. The images created a distinct atmosphere that matched he various parts of the story. I would give it a 4 on content. The voice consistency was mediocre. The quality as clear and consistently audible though only about 80% of the presentation, so I would give i a 2. Most of the pictures were clear, so I would give it a 3.
The M.L.K video spoke out to me. I liked the images and the way it created the setting and mood. For images i`d give it a 4. I would give it a 3 on content. The voice was okay not the clearest. Also the length was very nice, not to long or short to bore us.
The video for MLK was very educational and interesting. I graded the video based on the rubric and I decided to give the Content a 4 because the images fit and targeted the audience very well. the only thing that stood out was that the video had alot of personal information about him
I believe that the MLK video was very descriptive and i enjoyed watching it. The speech was very clear. I liked how parts of his actual speech were put in the movie. I thought that the information was very accurate and was worth watching.
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Very Unclear
Bad Speech
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In all 3 videos
Story 2 - Southern Heritage
Style - Voice - Consistency - 4
-Voice was clear and consistent through whole movie
Content - General - 4
Movie had over 10 pictures that stayed on topic.
I feel the Martin Luther King Video stood out to me most. I gave the presentation a three fr organization because it wasnt that consistent.I felt like his death should be at the end not the middle of the presentation. I gave the focus a 4 because different people talk and share information about Martin Luther King. I also gave a 4 for general because they show pictures that are appropriate to the topic.
Story 1- Martin Luther King Jr.
Layout-consistency- 3
Good pictures
Organization-3
They should have put the death at the end
Pacing-3
The pacing matched the pictures
Story 1 - Clear Narration, Clear Point. Appropriate pictures and Narration.
im highlighting the enegy and force i gave it a 4 out of 4 its was really good. the milk one was good too but i like the energy and fore better.
Story 1 - MLK
Content - 4 had a lot of god pictures
Focus - 4 knew purpose o story from the beginning
The video that I'm highlighting is Energy & Force. One rubric point was the stories Style Layout it was creative and was visually appealing. The second rubric point is organization the story and voice were timed right and was well organized. Also the story was a little unclear other then that it was good.
Video 2: Southern Heritage
1. Style (Voice) - voice quality is clear. - 4
2. Content (Images) - images communicates. - 4
3. Focus (Point of View) - maintains a clear focus throughout the whole video. - 4
The video for MLK was very educational and interesting. I graded the video based on the rubric and I decided to give the Content a 4 because the images fit and targeted the audience very well. Something that stood out to me was the Point of View. I gave that part a 4 because the story contains detailed personal information that reveals how MLK changed the world. Additionally, how he was inspired by other activists such as Ghandi.
The story I am highlighting is story #1 about MLK. The first rubric point that stood out was Voice Pacing and I gave a 2 because some parts of the story the voices seemed either too fast or too slow for the slideshow. The second rubric point that stood out to me was Organization because some pictures and parts seemed out of place such as talking about his death in the middle of the story and then immediately going back to talking about his life.
MLK
Focus was a very important and was a key goal to their assignment Grade: 4
Pictures: were a essential ascent to their slide show. Grade: 3
Magnetic Attraction
Focus was in a Sympathetic way to the audience. Grade 3
Pictures: were the same used over but went perfect with the story. Grade 4
Force and Energy
The Organization: was very neat good content and was relative etc.
Pictures: video was neat and carefully taken good essentials
M.L.K
bad pictures
voice was fading in and out
topic was good
Martin Luther King
-Focus/Point of view-4
-Style/Voice Consistency-2
-Audience Awareness-1
M.L.K
focus: they had great music and feeling to their story.
style: bad voice clarity
very good pictures and stayed on topic
magical lessons-
focus-3, because she didn't right away start talking about the main thing.
content-4, she had more then 10 pictures.
energy and force
content :4 it was funny and informational
style voice : 4 it was good and at was a good accent
style imagery :4 it was almost like a video
Story #3 Energy and Force.
Pictures/Graphics - 4 - the pictures were very graphic and you could see the images clearly.
Voice Pacing - 3 - the accent made it hard to understand - overall you understood what he was saying.
Story #1 - Martin Luther King
Focus -4- The focus was clearly on Martin Luther King. These pictures and audio supported the theme.
Voice -3- There were several cases of voice or audio but it was not edited well. The voice was faded at times and unclear.
Content -4- There were more than ten pictures and each supported the story line.
i am commenting on the video and force i am putting down a grade for
point of view- 4
audience- 4
organization-4
layout-4
i think this video was very good it was well introduced this person stayed on topic grabs audience's attention by humor
Energy obsorbed-
Forus-3
content-3
organization-3
style-3
conventions-3
no okay or bad miterial in my opinion.
gabriella iacono
story #3- energy and force
rubric
conventions(pics and graphics)- i like the way he mad his own cartoon sort of thing.4
style(voice)- you couldnt realy understand what the person was saying.1
Energy and Force
Focus- P.O.V- 4
You worked really hard
Content-P.O.V- 4
You used alot of pictures
Organization-P.O.V-4
Thought it out well
ENERGY ABSORBED
Focus - 4
The point of the slideshow was very clear,but made interesting at the same time. The video was enjoyable,funny and educational. The whole lesson in the video was understood very easily.
Style - Voice pacing - 4
The rythm of the voice makes the video funny. the voice and rythm made me want to pay attention to video and lesson more.
Story # 1: Martin Luther King
Focus: I gave the focus a four because the topic was consistent throughout the whole video.
Voice: i gave the voice a three because there were some parts of the video when you couldn't understand the voice clearly.
Conventions: I gave the conventions a four because all of the pictures were cropped correctly.
Story #3- energy and force.
focus- Point of view- 4
Conventions- Good (4)
Style- Good (3)
Focus- Good (4)
For the story I choose, I choose the story "Energy and Force". For the catogeory of : Style-Layout I gave it a 3 because the layout had a very good and creative layout and as well as appealing. It all went very well together.
Another catogeory I choose was "Style: Voice Consistency": I gave the author of this story a 4 because the narration was very funny and it helped me to get more involed in the story. Plus it went well with the story
The video that I am highlighting is the the Marther Luther King video. I give it a 4 on pictures because it had several photos that went with the story. I also give them a 4 on focus point of you they made it very clear and for elementary school students they did very well.
M.L.K.
Style (voice) -1- some words would get cut off,
and was unclear
Content-4- many images
Organization -2- skipped around a lot, story
line didn't make sense half of the time
Magnetic Attraction
Content-4- many pictures/ilustrations/sounds
Organization-4- everything made sense and was easy to follow
Style (voice) -4- voice is clear and understandable
Energy and Force
Style (voice)-2- voice was clear some of the time
Organization-4- everything was clear, visual and easy to follow
Content-3- images were okay
Story #1- Martin Luther King Jr.
Voice- stayed on topic with story but sometimes cut off and blurry- 2
Convention- Good graphics and pictures to the story- 3
Focus- Stayed on point and on the topic of M.L.K
Story #2- Megnetic Attraction
Voice- Understandable and matches the pictures- 4
Focus- Unclear at most parts of the story- 2
Convention- good pictures and correct grammer- 3
Story #3- Force and Energy
Voice- unclear and some parts I couldnt understand.
Point of View- Very Clear and stayed on 1 topic throughout- 4
Story #1- M.L.K
Voicing: Sometimes it was a bit unclear, and the speakers either went too fast or too slow. At the end the voices would fade out before they were done speaking and you couldn't hear what they had to say.- 2
Focus: The focus of this presentation was very clear from the beginning You could tell it was going to be about MLK. -4
Point of View: It was clear and stayed on topic.- 4
Story #2: Magnetic Attraction
Voicing: She was very clear and went at the right pace that fit the story.-4
Focus: You could understand the story line, but she left out a couple of details, like mentioning she was divorced, so when she got married I was a bit baffled. -3
Convention: Cute Pictures to match the story, some of them were blurry thought. - 3
Story#3- Force and Energy
Voice: Horrible. Just Horrible. I could not understand anything this boy was saying. -1
Point of View: From the beginning of this video I was confused. The next thing I see is some character lady with a gun and the guy shooting her and then I knew I was completely lost. Did not understand at any point. - 1 ( or a 0 if that's an option)
MLK
3-WORDS GOT CUT OFF BUT EASY TO UNDERSTAND
ALOT OF PICTURES AND VIDEO -4
The video that stood out to me was the M.L.K Video. I think it was very impressive how the 5th graders made such a detailed video about Marthin Luther King's fight for civil rights. It was most impressive that they obtained historic Audio footage and pictures. The voice howevercould have been done a little better. Either way, it was a great video.
Pictures (4): Historic photoes were very impressive, and gave me a better idea of what the movie was about.
Audio (4): The audio was historic and actuall footage of M.L.K's "I have a dream" speech.
Voice: (2) From time to time the voice was difficult to understand, and were delayed during the opening of a new picture.
M.L.K
content-4: showed a lot of images and clips
focus-4: it got straight to the point about martin luther king's life.
Magnetic Attraction Story 2
- Content - 4. Pictures correctly represented the story.
- Voice - 4. Clear and consistent and properly paced.
- Layout - 4. Creative/visually appealing. Consistent theme; fonts, colors, and background work together.
Story 2 - Magnetic Attraction
- Voice [4]: Her voice had the right rhythm and tone to keep viewers attached to her story.
- Style [3]: The pictures were very appealing and matched the story perfectly.
- Organization [4]: The sequence of events were very organized, easy to follow the story throughout the whole video.
some of them were good but were really boring. i graded most of them a high grade becas they did much better then i would. Overall they were very good.
Story[2] Magnetic Attraction
Voice-Cosistency-[4] The narration was really good and kept to the point of the story.
Sequencing of Info-[3] The information was in good order but one part seemed to be missing.
General-[4] The story was overall very good. Nice pictures, narration, etc. It was very entertaining.
the M.L.K story stood out the most to me.
Organization - 4 it was well put together and they put a lot of effort into it.
Voice - 3 they were clear but there were times where i couldn't understand them at times.
Style - 4 they had pictures perfect and it all went together nicely
story 1: M.L.K
general-3-good choice of pics
voice pacing-3-faded at surtain points
images-4-pictures matched the point of the story
story 2:Magnetic Attraction
general-4-pictures matched the narration
sequence of info.-4-narration met focus of pictures
voice pacing-4-good voice narration
story 3:Energy & Force
voice-1-Not clear
point of view-2- knows what the focus of the topic is
images-2-pictures didnt catch my attention
Story 2: Magnetic Attractions
Point of View - 2 - had nothing to do with anything magnetic except for that one math problem.
General - 4 - tons of photos and used in a creative way.
Story 3: Force of Energy/ Energy of Force (same thing)
Layout - 3 - welled layout and told precise.
Grammar - 3 - grammar wasnt used correctly.
M.L.K
Organization - 4 It was good and well put together.
Voice - 3 It was ok but sometimes it would fade away and you couldn't hear it.
General - 4 They had a point and stayed with it
M.L.K
I gave this video a three. The reason that I gave it a three was because the images had doubles. I also gave it a three because the voice part of the video was sometimes unclear. for the grade that did it, it was a good and educational video.
The Martin Luther King video I graded on Orginization ( sequence of information ), Content and voice consistency. The speakers paused a lot, but added a lot of pictures, and sound effects, so I graded everything with a 3.
all the movies were very good in detail. as they went on i realized that the information was starting to be put in a better way and the person was getting more familiar with the things they were using.
the martin luther king video not only had great pictures but it had voice over and lots of great effects. i would give it a 4
In the martin luther king video i found that the only real problem with it was the voices. I scored this video on the :voice, croping, and leangth. Scoring each catagory from one to four I found only the voice recived a three, besides that the two other catagories get fours. I found this video to be both informitive and entertaining.
All three of the videos had good points, and bad points. Overall, they were all very well done. The one that I enjoyed the most was the Martin Luther King video. The images created a distinct atmosphere that matched he various parts of the story. I would give it a 4 on content. The voice consistency was mediocre. The quality as clear and consistently audible though only about 80% of the presentation, so I would give i a 2. Most of the pictures were clear, so I would give it a 3.
The M.L.K video spoke out to me. I liked the images and the way it created the setting and mood. For images i`d give it a 4. I would give it a 3 on content. The voice was okay not the clearest. Also the length was very nice, not to long or short to bore us.
The video for MLK was very educational and interesting. I graded the video based on the rubric and I decided to give the Content a 4 because the images fit and targeted the audience very well. the only thing that stood out was that the video had alot of personal information about him
I believe that the MLK video was very descriptive and i enjoyed watching it. The speech was very clear. I liked how parts of his actual speech were put in the movie. I thought that the information was very accurate and was worth watching.
Pual's project- Energy and Force-
Content-Image-4- The image was pretty good.
Convention-Pic./Graphics- 4- The graphics compared to some other things isn't bad at all.
Style voice consistancy-4- The voice was good, I could hear everythink loud and clear.
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